Sail Away Sweet Sister

This is all about God, prayer, community, music, art, poetry, theology, love and all sorts of things people run into on their life journey, especially when the second half of life is looming ahead. It is inspired by Fr Richard Rohr, by the Contemplative Outreach of Fr Thomas Keating, by C.G. Jung, by C.S. Lewis, Alan Watts, St Beuno's retreat house and all the communities I have a privilege to belong to. It is dedicated to and I hope will be used by my nearest and dearest, scattered all over the planet, and who are falling upwards with me.

Wednesday, 6 June 2012

Adam Lay Y-Bounden (re-take by Richard)

This is silly but I enjoyed it - written quickly merely as an exercise for my Japanese student so he can practise saying his 'a' sounds which he isn't very good at.



Adam ate the apple down

The apple given whole

It was the apple Eve gave him

The apple that she stole



And when he ate the apple whole

He was in agony

Because the apple he was giv’n

Was from a curséd tree



Adam had an aptitude

To feel the world aright

But now he had an attitude

That made his life a blight



Before his eating of the fruit

His way was straight and clear

But now the blighted tree he saw

Confused his heart with fear



The angles in his path ahead

He now saw with dismay

Would be his lot till Kingdom come

Until that happy day



A tree of knowledge seems so fine

Its fruit to be desired

But we must beware of that

Which leaves us mad and tired








1 comment:

  1. If the apple had not been munched
    we wouldn't've had our Lord

    and with eternal bliss (I have a hunch)
    we'd have all got awful bored

    (anyway it wasn't Eve wot done it, she was framed!)

    ps, groovy poem coz!

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